Title: A New Superstar
Author: DamnitsX3sher
Fanfic URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/BlehX2Now/
Reviewer: Xlylb4bydr3am3r
Story Title: 3/5
Appearance: 7/10
The Background is kind of plan in my opinion and the banner is kind of confusing
Forewords: 2/10
You didn't explain who was the main characters or anything about the characters in the story
Plot: 13/15
Flow: 8/10
I like how u write it but I prefer it not in paragraphs cuz its harder to read and it can lead to boredom.
Originality/Creativity: 15/15
Your story was was unique I haven't read a story like it
Characterization: 8/8
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 12/12
Your grammer is pretty good
Writing style: 8/10
Like I said before paragraph form was kind of boring n hard to concentrate
Enjoyment: 5/5
Sub total:81/100
Bonus: 5/5
Total:86 /100
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