Title: Destined
Author: Yalun_Loved
Fanfic URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/jonghyunn/
Reviewer: Loveebliss @ MG
Story Title: 2/5
That that catchy and doesn't really match the story.
Appearance: 7/10
Poster & background doesn't match that much since the poster is purple and the background is black.
Forewords: 9/10
You told the reader what the story was about and what they were going to read about. Maybe tell the readers alittle about the characters?
Plot: 10/15
Couldn't find the plot.
Flow: 9/10
Originality/Creativity: 13/15
Characterization: 6/8
Didn't tell much about the characters but it was enough.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 11/12
Found only some minor errors.
Writing style: 10/10
Enjoyment: 3/5
Disappointed that it ended so fast. I wanna read more. ><
Sub total: 80/100
Bonus: 5/5
For wanting me to review you fic, because I finished this late..Wish you could add more chapters though & good luck on your future fics.
Total: 85/100
Author: Yalun_Loved
Fanfic URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/jonghyunn/
Reviewer: Loveebliss @ MG
Story Title: 2/5
That that catchy and doesn't really match the story.
Appearance: 7/10
Poster & background doesn't match that much since the poster is purple and the background is black.
Forewords: 9/10
You told the reader what the story was about and what they were going to read about. Maybe tell the readers alittle about the characters?
Plot: 10/15
Couldn't find the plot.
Flow: 9/10
Originality/Creativity: 13/15
Characterization: 6/8
Didn't tell much about the characters but it was enough.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 11/12
Found only some minor errors.
Writing style: 10/10
Enjoyment: 3/5
Disappointed that it ended so fast. I wanna read more. ><
Sub total: 80/100
Bonus: 5/5
For wanting me to review you fic, because I finished this late..Wish you could add more chapters though & good luck on your future fics.
Total: 85/100
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