Having it Bad

Title:Having it Bad
Author:Soul's Cradle
Fanfic URL:http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/dusk_summer/
Reviewer:YJLuver @ http://www.melting-gelato.co.nr/

Story Title: 3/5

- If I didn’t read the story, got to admit the title is really not understandable. ‘Having it bad’ needs to be explain in what term or not it will be confusing.

Apperance: 7/10

- Your appearance is quit well because I keep on spotting only Taecyeon in most of the chapters so it’s not confusing.

Forewords:5/10 & nbsp; -You yourself realized it... the foreword is quit confusing... it will be much better if the foreword is based on Nichkhun Point of View... but still quit good

Plot: 10/15

-Your plot is not confusing, simple, and easy to understand also got to give great point for the humors.
Flow: 6 /10

-The flow is great because it’s neither so fast nor slow because it will be too boring if the story is to fast same goes if the story is too slow so keep it up.

Originality/Creativity: 14/15

- I got to admit your creativity is great. I love it how you can make a funny statement by a simple words or action by the character.
Characterization: 6/8

- Your characterization is good. Each chapter explain slowly the character’s characterization and it was great for an author because most of an author forgot to slipped that in.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 10/12

- I do spot some grammar mistakes, spelling and some vocabulary’s mistake but it’s not too much. I got to admit you do have a great grammar.
Writing style: 6/10

-I can see you have your own writing skill which is great for a writer…. For my suggestion, it will be much better if you can make the ‘underscore’ lesser

Enjoyment: 4/5
- I didn’t give full mark maybe because I haven’t read the story fully but so far it’s really enjoyable and fun.
Sub total: 75/100

Bonus: 4/5

For your great efforts in making the story enjoyable and the Korean words translation at the end of each chapters.